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"i hate empty beer bottles and empty cigarette packs" by Skarlet Rebell Queen

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So you found someone else,
and displayed her in front of me.
was that supposed to sting?

so she does all your laundry
and doesn't spend all of her time
writing poetry
was i supposed to show you guilt?

so she plays the perfect girl,
and i was just being me
because i thought that was enough
for you

i didn't change, not since the
first time you said you loved me
i started to change when you
stopped saying the words

and i wrote and wrote and wrote
but you hated it when i buried myself
with words,
said it was "just a waste of time, would you
grab me a beer?"
and i poured half of the bottle in a glass
because that's all i can give,
take it or leave it...
and took it, you did
but you never poured the rest in yourself....

so i saved all my indifference in an empty
bottle and sealed it tight.
i didn't know that as it ages it turns to hate...

no, it don't sting!
no, i don't feel guilty!

you should have let me go
when i could still feel the pain,
not now, when all i can feel is relief...










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On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (681) writes:
damn! this was simply brilliant, can't say i've ever seen such words well put together :) you kick ass madam Skarlet -symph-


On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, Alanarchy (1618) writes:
What a kick in the face those last three lines were. Well done.


On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, Err0r (579) writes:
Like taking a stab in the dark this could've went one of two ways, and you nailed the target. Great write.


On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, Suicide Is Right (93) writes:
Left me wanting more, I really like the whole thing. Good title as well. ~Crow


On Monday July 16th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (445) writes:
omg i love the ending. ;) but it was wonderful overall


On Monday July 16th, 2007, veingo (589) writes:
Damn. I like the way this played out. Nice work. ^V^



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