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"our eyes made love" by Skarlet Rebell Queen

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From the corner of my eye
I saw your sweat drip
from your temple

and the way you tried
to wipe it off was
just as graceful as salty water
on sand

you were leaning on the wall
just like i was
playfully devouring the
cigarette in your hand

i tried not to look
but i had this strong urge to
and i had no choice but to be
enslaved by it

you caught my stare
and you stayed there for quite a while
and boy, we held on longer

you opened my mind in such a way
that had left me wanting to stay
glued to my wall , i was

you flowed into me
through optical electricity
and shook my whole being
even for just that moment

then it just had to happen

the cigarette in your hand,
as if on cue,
broke the intensity of your stare
as it slipped from between your fingers


.....


strangers we were that day
strangers we still were on the morrow

but

right there i came



just by making love with your eyes



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On Wednesday July 11th, 2007, Mylissa (1122) writes:
Well this was a sexy piece. I love it. Wonderful.


On Wednesday July 11th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (689) writes:
woooooooooow now that is intensely hotness if i ever read it, the imagery was excellent i felt as if i was there watchin it all go down...keep these cuming lol i mean coming :) -symph-


On Sunday July 8th, 2007, mysterylove (76) writes:
gotta love the feeling that came when it happened.. awesome write


On Saturday July 7th, 2007, Err0r (585) writes:
'you flowed into me/through optical electricity' This line alone generates me. =) Wonderful write.


On Saturday July 7th, 2007, Kinkypoptart (768) writes:
wow... amazing how enraptured you can become in the simplicity of a staring contest... great write. -tart


On Saturday July 7th, 2007, AHHH (243) writes:
damn, that's the shit.


On Saturday July 7th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1089) writes:
jeesh...excellent imagery...every word...*sighs* those looks we share with strangers sometimes, that leave us gasping and reaching for something sturdy to hold onto...excellent. ~*Beth*~



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