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"I Should Have Said..." by Elf

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I curse myself,
I made a mistake,
loosing what was most important,
If i had spoken up,
would he be here now?
I could have said something,
I could have at least said, "goodbye."

On that warm afternoon,
with the sun in my eyes,
I ran,
waving, crying,
but i was too late,
to even say "goodbye."

I always prided myself on having courage,
but when my voice catches in my throat,
how can i speak?
when will i see him again?
sooner is always better than later,
but you can never be sure,
so, the least you can say,
is "goodbye."



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On Friday May 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:
WONDERFUL! *applauds* I know that feeling so well! Simply amazing, write more! I love my friends.


On Friday May 23rd, 2003, Elf (48) writes:
thank you!


On Friday May 23rd, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
arrgh .. i hate that, when that little speaker inside shuts off ... it happens more often then most of us would like to admit .. awsome write .. the icecream's worst enemy is heat . D&A


On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:
youre wonderful! i love it! -B


On Friday May 23rd, 2003, Elf (48) writes:
thank you sara, and everyone else to; i really appreciate the commentary.


On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:
Awesome piece!Keep it up!


On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:
Hey it is a really good poem, my ex b/f who I love left to go in the Marines and I hade selfish pride and didn't even say good-bye. So this poem really shows how stupid I was but it is a good poem!


On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:
this was a beautiful work... i know the feelings... nice job <3Dommi


On Wednesday June 25th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
eloquent. know the feeling..



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