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"[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

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My blanket
chokes with hands
made out of loneliness.

I can’t breathe, I can’t breathe, I can’t breathe
anymore without...

alarms sounding.
My mind on autopilot.

(Smothered I am,
in not second-,
but fifteenth-thoughts)

Two years ended in two days//
And those six months
just weren’t long enough.
 
Death is a twin-sized bed
that reminds a girl
she used to sleep
in perfect comfort [almost].



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On Saturday July 28th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (148) writes:
I had never read yours neither but i loved this.


On Wednesday July 11th, 2007, Nuri (192) writes:
I can't believe how much you've captured in this. Well writ.


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, An Expired Member (50) writes:
Wow. This is really good. I like it a lot. So much to take in for so few words.


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Tania (307) writes:
ahhh.. loved this ..'my blanket chokes with hands of lonliness.' ... 'death is a twin sized bed' beautiful display cutieful.lovvvve it :)


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Mab (1018) writes:
this is my favorite from you for sure..loved it!


On Thursday July 12th, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:
i'm glad you liked it! =)


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
i fully agree with the saint... perfect


On Thursday July 12th, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:
not going to lie, i feel quite confident after receiving a third "perfect" on this. thank you very much!


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
Jolene, Jolene, Jolene!!! **=)** I agree with the_Saint, spot on perfecto this was. Brevity and maximum inpact with minimal wording. Love it. -Carl


On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, James_the_Saint (131) writes:
This is perfect.


On Thursday July 12th, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:
thank you very much! i wasn't sure what the response would be for this one, so i'm really glad you and many others enjoyed it.



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