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How Sadly Unoriginal

Staring at my reflection
In the dark
I tear up the note
He had left me

Look up
Down
Anywhere
But at my own eyes

I leave
Hands shaking
He leaves
Smiling while crying

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On Friday April 18th, 2008, Choronzon (226) writes:

I guess you both lost.

On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, carlosjackal (1724) writes:

"Smiling while crying"..Killer ending to a brilliant little piece. Heart-wrencher. -Carl

On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, batman nipples (2246) writes:

"Anywhere/But at my own eyes"..a ray of originality and poetic brilliance in an otherwise null write. I understand why you titled it like you did, but it does hold a little something special. Never stop.

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