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this is one of those "about me" poem assignments they give us every year. someones advice was to do it from someone elses perspective, so its third person, but it IS about me. *ponders* o screw it. dont read this. read ~Scribbling Out Oxygen.~ At least that one shows what i can do. this one just sucks. -B
~

Six years old
A crack was heard, soft though it may be
The second rung wasn’t good enough for her
So blue-green dripped
And the grass grew
While she settled for pale pink
One time she was happy
And determinedly refused the dark fabric

Simultaneously
A new longing evolved
And sibling rivalry wrote her blocking
It was hardly more legible than a hairline fracture could provide

X + 4
Twenty-five percent smile
Twenty-five percent decency
Fifty percent Speak of the Devil
No metaphors
The worst 365 kicked the habit
And the faucet leaks softly when it's deserved
She discovered a melody for the first time
And beauty poured itself from graphite
Or so she thought

But it was not until the fourth prime
That any masterpiece was worth reading
Because her life force tasted too
Perfect
To resist
And her inspiration flowed too
Fluidly
To disregard
So her words screamed too
Loudly
To ignore

Subsequent
Word of mouth proved helpful for once
She typed out an orator
And mailed in a letter
And one more time
She was happy


~
GOD DANGIT, WHERE DID MY BLOODY TALENT GO?!
*deep breaths* anyway. i did it for school, so youve gotta give me some slack. ill write something good and get it posted real soon. i promise. i think. i hope.



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On Monday January 16th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
lol the title striked curioustity in me I couldn't resist. And the pome was good


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, Sky Singer (212) writes:
i keep on coming back to your works; they're wonderful. and yes, sometimes the lines don't quite make sense to the reader, but that's the beauty of poetry-- it is what you take from it =)


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, heart broken suicide (25) writes:
i actually kinda like it i mean it doesnt make sense but i like it


On Thursday February 17th, 2005, Alec Pure (329) writes:
um naturally anything that says dont read i will read didnt think it sucked but hey thats just my opinion coulc be wrong nice write ~~GOTHIC~~


On Sunday July 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (69) writes:
I like this better than scribbling out oxygen. - - - Mari


On Thursday May 27th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:
the title just draws me in dear...lol... reverse psychology...lol...its nice. really. not sucky at all.


On Friday April 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:
Man, I just had to read this. The title just kinda made it so, nice write, and it doesn't suck, you knew that before you slapped that title on it ;-)


On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (158) writes:
Umm, I kind of think this one is btter than Scribbling Out Oxygen.......


On Sunday March 7th, 2004, Demosthenes (222) writes:
youre kidding, right? -B


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, batman nipples (2246) writes:
This poem...did not suck.


On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
DAMMIT, I READ IT AGAIN, DAMN TITLE >_<


On Sunday December 7th, 2003, comablackout (2) writes:
sorry, i read it, i had to though, i mean, the title, AHHH IT DRAWS YOU IN!!!!!!!


On Monday December 1st, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
Why do you not want people to read this, this was a good piece, you have talent, good work ~Emptyness~


On Friday November 7th, 2003, Drea (920) writes:
i really liked this. you are very talented. i mean that ~Drea~


On Saturday November 1st, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:
I did read it... will I die? Am I curs-ed for life??? Aggghhh!


On Saturday September 27th, 2003, wilted (306) writes:
It's a good piece. I'm expecially surprised one of such magnitude could be written for school. I always have writers block upon writing works for school. Grawr. Nice work. k.i.r.s.t.y.n


On Sunday September 21st, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
this doesnt suck at all, good write :D *~*aNDReW*~*


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, Elf (48) writes:
i don't believe your capable of writing anything that sucks. this certaintly doesn't. stop being so hard on yourself. nice poem. i like it.


On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:
I liked this a lot Demos'...your talent is there...don't worry so much(=


On Thursday September 4th, 2003, OLd SouL (833) writes:
lol I enjoyed the hell out of it. It was very entertaining.


On Monday September 1st, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:
well.... i liked the title... no, its a good piece. some parts were stronger than others. i thought that the "x+4" stanza was the best.



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