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Dust

Swallowing the dust
that you
p...
.o..
..u.
...r
d...
.o..
..w.
...n
m.
.y
t.....
.h....
..r...
...o..
....a.
.....t
has always been
my favorite
reason
to hate you.

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On Thursday December 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:

very cool!

On Thursday May 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:

really original, good write

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, batman nipples (2246) writes:

The structure of this piece reminded me of the way sand flows...it gracefully winds its way down in a twirly fashion...exquisite piece.

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

concrete enough for me......well done.......urban

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, wilted (306) writes:

i love it when poets play with structure like you do. Very good write. k.i.r.s.t.y.n

On Saturday July 12th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

I can think of many things that are that dust, what a write.

On Monday July 7th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

This is such a fun piece. What a visual stimulant.

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

Short. precise and yet vast....Great write...~VelvetT~

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, nell (327) writes:

although this could have so many many meanings and you think it's nonsense i like it, the way you wrote it is really kewl=)

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

i went to rehab for white dust going up my nose and down my throat, this reminds me of it, Great write. :-*

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

i realize after reading that comment that it really sounds like thats what its about. funny how people i dont know understand me more than i understand myself. -B

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

yes yes yes! i feel it.. i know it... i am it.. and i taste the dust like so many crypts.

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