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   You always think my hair looks perfect
   No matter how or whether I bother to put it up
   "So long and beautiful"
   Even when I haven't washed it in three days
 
   It's addictive how you like me more than I do
   Never figured that was possible
   Not that I mind or anything...
    
   When you freeze in mid-sentence
   And it takes me forever to quit staring at you long enough
   To ask what's wrong
   You tell me again
   That I must have the greenest eyes you've ever seen
   Even though they really look grey in this light
   And it's ecstacy
   Only legal
   
   Come outside
   Lie on the grass with me at dusk
   Show me Taurus again
   So we can laugh at how little it resembles the bull
    
   When we don't go inside till morning
   When there are ladybugs crawling in our hair
   When the mosquitoes suck every last drop of blood from your ankles
   When you don't mind
   As long as they didn't get me
    
   That's when you're everything
   That's when you can't let me go
   Because what if you're not really there?
   Because what if you leave?
   And I freeze and cry and go into convulsions?
   Because what if that's how much of a drug you are to me?
    
   If I told you it made me high
   To know that if I fell asleep in your arms
   You'd carry me to your bed and sleep on the couch
   Would you laugh at me?
   Or would you hold me until I did fall asleep
   And prove me right once more?
    
   Greeting the dark with an aching jaw
   From smiling all day
   From being with you
   Waking up with it hurting more
   From smiling all night
   From just dreaming of you
    
   This is what has me sucked in
   This is what has me by the neck
   This is what draws me back to you
   Knows my secrets and threatens to tell the world
   But I can keep it quiet
    
   I can kiss you and make it forget
   I can kiss you and make it leave
   I can kiss you.
    
   How's that for an addiction?




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On Tuesday August 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:
its really sweet, i love it, its addicting!


On Tuesday August 9th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (319) writes:
This made me want to cry. Pure sweetness. -kitty


On Friday March 4th, 2005, Velvet_Raventon (696) writes:
Your poem's addictive, I can't stop reading it... how beautiful... ~V.


On Monday December 13th, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now (24) writes:
awwwwwwwwwwww that's so sweet


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
Fucking amazing. I can only envy you for your lovely addictions.


On Saturday November 27th, 2004, Trapped_with_Insanity (131) writes:
*Speachless*..This is going in my fav._Diviana_


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
what a wonderfully honest, beautifully written piece. perfectly observed and captured with compelling, gentle skill. lovely.


On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (30) writes:
this a great poem. a love can completly change your rythm of thought. so good.


On Wednesday June 2nd, 2004, Lynaes (1128) writes:
I have to admit, I've read this a million times, and I've never been able to comment till now.. Just absolutely stunning, amazing. I really love this. -L


On Wednesday June 2nd, 2004, Lynaes (1128) writes:
Such beautiful personal touches, warm and sincere, I can't get over how perfect this is. *clicks favs*


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, AshtrayDirt (41) writes:
sounds all too familiar to me, except i'm not addicted to it. the male character is what i am speaking of. nice piece.


On Thursday December 11th, 2003, SilentStalker (1320) writes:
...damn, you're good...this is honesty at its best...no shame, just thrown right in front of the reader, like it or not...and I like this one a lot... -Darun


On Thursday October 30th, 2003, urbanhumility (1366) writes:
deep and in the thick of love, an addiction indeed,well spoken.......urban


On Monday August 18th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
how I missed this one before is a mystery but, this is a beautiful piece of work right here, outstanding.


On Sunday August 17th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
Lovely... I like the way you took a word like addiction, that people relate to something negative and turned it into something wonderful...you are the master of your words and with this poem you display that you are in control of their meaning as well.


On Sunday July 20th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
I Take Its Memory With Me Everywhere. GPhD.


On Monday July 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (19) writes:
...now i know why it's on everyone's favorite's list...


On Sunday July 6th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:
This poem feels very honest..From the inner core that always shines through in the end. I loved it..Thanks for sharing..~Velvet~


On Sunday July 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:
i enjoy the ride of this poem, the feeling of falling out in a car's backseat down a hilly country road.wish i could relate to the content.


On Thursday June 12th, 2003, ColdScaredAlone (121) writes:
it's absolutely beautiful.


On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:
Wow...tears are streaming down my face. This is utterly beautiful...i...i can't explain...amazing....


On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (341) writes:
Wow, this is beautiful... absolutely beautiful. You are so fortunate to have this kind of relationship. I'm not sure whether I'm crying because I'm jealous or because I'm touched by the beauty of this poem. Keep up the good work!


On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:
Sara, I am sorry to bust your little bubble, but you cannot even claim to be worse than me after this one. It is simply amazing. I am not just saying that to flatter you. really. --eileen who is not better than you!


On Monday June 2nd, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (423) writes:
i love it. so powerful. so spiffy...


On Saturday May 31st, 2003, Elf (48) writes:
fabulous! it takes my breath away; it's beautiful.


On Saturday May 31st, 2003, SeventhCircle (24) writes:
very good. eileen's right, it's probably your best work yet.


On Saturday May 31st, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:
Its wonderful! It's your best work! I love it forever! yay!


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, evolve (2293) writes:
I don't know if it was your best...but it's definitely in the top three.



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