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Asterisk

[There was an introduction here but I got rid of it.]

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Whenever I speak
Kiss the punctuation
Because all that matters
Is what you can't see

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On Monday November 29th, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now (24) writes:

I like it better short without a bunch of words ending with -ation, "Brevity is the heart of length" or something like that

On Monday February 23rd, 2004, batman nipples (2246) writes:

I love the intro. Asterisks rock.

On Thursday December 11th, 2003, SilentStalker (1318) writes:

...hehe, I've tried writing exactly the same type of poem...two thesauruses later I threw away the idea...I like the way you kept with it... -Darun

On Sunday September 7th, 2003, Bluegirl (243) writes:

short and sweet :) I like it

On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:

I got it the second time! yay for me! man, I could never write something this good. damn sara.

On Thursday May 29th, 2003, Elf (48) writes:

Haha! I love the intro, hilarious. The poem is short, but wonderful.

On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

:::grabs hair, yanks it out and hands it to you::: [finally] .+. wonderful write buLLET producER .D&A

On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, SeventhCircle (24) writes:

a longer intro than poem is definitely brooklynish. but the poem is good too. whatever it is.

On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, Sinnocence (53) writes:

wow i liked what the actual poem said. no one ever thinks about things like that.

On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (333) writes:

Heh, I was paying more attention to the intro than I was to the poem... sorry. :-/ The poem is really good too though. I love short works. Next time, you don't have to spend so much time explaining. The poem was good on its own :-)

On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:

this was short and sweet... i liked the intro lol.. i know what its like for work to not turn out right.. peash! <3Dommi

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