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...Something that Rhymes

~Before This Is Over, Just Let Me Write Something That Rhymes~

Hold me close
Don't let go before I die
Let me weep
Then I can mix your tears with mine

So much blood
O God, it's all over your hands
I love you
But there's only so much I can stand

Damn, it hurts
Death sure is a bastard
It's so long
O Lord, why won't you take me faster?

Where'd you go?
I can't see your eyes anymore
Don't be gone
Why didn't I stop this all before?

Forgive me
I didn't think I'd ever really live
Now I die
And see that this damn life was such a gift

I can't feel
Now how am I supposed to know you're here?
Keep talking
Please love, don't stop, it helps to dull the fear

It's ending
I'll die before
I finish
writing this
Not now, please
I never got
to even taste
your--

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On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (73) writes:

vocal rhymes...really nice

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:

I really like this. It actually portrays the fear that people feel when they thought they wanted to die and then realize they don't. I especially love how it cuts off in the end. Just wonderful!

On Friday October 24th, 2003, Lydia Jade (783) writes:

wow!! i really really love this!! its amazing, and i really injoy the flow of ryhming poems, and this one is great! ~Blood~

On Saturday September 13th, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:

Man, Sara, you're a genius. now call andrew.

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, fuck you (30) writes:

Wish I could rhyme. Great piece. If I could I would add it to my favs. I would if i could, but I cant so I wont...

On Monday September 1st, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

Truly stirring, it's so sad that we dont realize our bad choices until we've already chosen them... -Kryz

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

awesome poem! i didnt like the rhymes tho, i dont normally like rhyme poems, but it was great! *~*aNDReW*~*

On Wednesday July 23rd, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

Oh the things we regret before the end, I love this one to along with the rest of your stuff.

On Wednesday June 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

Excellent. Makes you think twice about suicide!

On Tuesday May 20th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

Well this certainly is a suprise. you got some damn good talent.-Kefka

On Tuesday May 20th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (407) writes:

amazing

On Saturday May 17th, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:

dude.you are better than me. Proof: brian has never written anything close to that good on one of my poems, so ha!

On Friday May 16th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

I've loved this one since the first time I saw it. Its a really really REALLY good poem, Sara. Incredibly passionate, and beautifully sad (it seems like people use that phrase a lot here) Write me s'more. Boo

On Friday May 16th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I agree with Shadow, and its a good peice of writing, I like the stanza beginning "Forgive me"

On Thursday May 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

that makes u really think about how people say the "want"to die, but would they really want to wants its happens..very nice writing ...Shadow

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