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"Stuck=In=The=Bottle" by OttOEviL

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Crying upon deaf ears
As i scream with my mouth closed

The fragile image of our last kiss
As my heart pumps its last try

Time is a never ending tic and toc
In these moments of your hollow words

Blank stares at a black canvas of our life
Never to be brushed again with colors of love

Im subduede in emotions of pain and sorrow
Stuck in the bottle like the wooden ship

Built so carefully
But never to sail away

Never to catch a breeze into a sunset
Forever standing still, in stale hollow air.




© 2007 OttOEviL

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On Friday June 22nd, 2007, OttOEviL (94) writes:
Thanx 4 the spellcheck..God it was so late last night when i wrote this..Hahaha...~OttO~


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, Aunty Depressant (676) writes:
*Relates to the feeling...always a goos poem if one can make another do that in my mind.(check your spelling though-subdued,carefully,stale)


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, unspeakable truth (145) writes:
"Im subdued in emotions of pain and sorrow. Stuck in the bottle like a wooden ship" So much in just those words alone. An excellent write.


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1793) writes:
Reminds me of being drunk and writing how love hurts.. awsome reminder


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, Aunty Depressant (676) writes:
Or the absence of what you thought you had. Hurts more I think when they are there, but no longer there for you.


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, Mylissa (1072) writes:
This is my favorite write from you yet...brilliant



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