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LasT WordS

I am incomplete damaged and imperfect
This world is not divided between saints and sinners
Forgive me for being human
I struggle i suffer i know what it means to survive
This world is crumbling
I'll take my flaws with me and beyond you
The days pass by unnoticed as I choose not to see the bars
Imprisoned for life while free to go
With a key clutched in my desperate hands all along
Beyond those walls i am wounded and scarred
Isolated but aware and alive
I alone maintain control
I accept no higher soul
I am my beginning and my end
This is a call for redemption
For those i know who have been led blind
With my wounds of the forsaken i'm still screaming
And i might stand alone with no one left to listen
But the last words are yet to be heard....

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On Monday June 25th, 2007, capt_funguy (999) writes:

lots of " isms " in this ... but isolationism, and individualism stand out the most ... fortess of one, of solitude ... of last bastion against the bullshit .... dug this completely ... funguy

On Monday June 25th, 2007, Ainsof (1838) writes:

self actualizing...a drumming battle cry. I sometimes wonder if last words are ever heard, if they are spoken. An interesting question is raised in those last two lines, one to be unanswered.

On Saturday March 31st, 2007, Gold Dust Woman (170) writes:

this had alot of good lines that i liked.... this was a pwerful read, and I personally like the word choice and the layout you used in this.

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, SyntaxSerpent (5) writes:

Enchanting...I was spellbound the entire time, especially at the lines "I alone maintain control/ I accept no higher soul/ I am my beginning and my end" Nicely done

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, OttOEviL (95) writes:

Thank you very much...

On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, Sin (1637) writes:

this sounded like triumph to me even though the words were rather bleak...resonating with inner strength and resolve, i found this quite powerful, you continue to impress me ~kristy

On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, OttOEviL (95) writes:

=) Thank You... *WinK*

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