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"sO FuCK It...GooDByE" by OttOEviL

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Ripping like tidal waves through my viens
Its the rush of the darkest moment from pain

The split second you hear those intensified words
The ones that leave the stomach flipping with turns

Sight blacking in and out no peripheral view
Trying to comprehend these words im not use to

Heart starts to skip
Sweat starts to drip
Mind starts to trip
Fuck get a grip

She speaks again i cover my ears wipe my tears
As i think to myself we've had to many years

So many years and so many memories
But half of those years we were nothing but enemies

Hold on
Stay steady
Dont shake
Get ready

On that thought alone i gaze past her cold eyes
Thanks for the good times the bad times the lies

This is the end of my sleepless night cries
Here's my farewell to our lost love failed tries

I look down at the ground look back up in a frown
This is all i know now

So
Fuck it
GOODBYE



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On Thursday June 7th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (450) writes:
seen it so many times. heart breaking, i just love your expression. another good one man, you are so real in your writing.


On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:
shit i loved this..it was intense..and believe me ur not alone, by no means manda


On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:
usually people lose flow and power when they try to rhyme, it tends to seem forced, but this flowed down the page very well..and the emotions seethed through your words ~kristy


On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, OttOEviL (95) writes:
Yet i did have a little trouble at the end....


On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, An Expired Member (5) writes:
reading this i felt the intensity, the passion, the rage, the sadness, and every thing. it was great, you''ve definatly got talent!! loved it!!


On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:
This was left me feeling full of intensity. I love the passion behind it. Outstanding.


On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, evolve (2245) writes:
I like how you changed the ending up a bit. This burnt with a flaming hot fire of intensity and spoke with a creeping dark atmosphere of despair.. I wish I had words of peace to offer your restless soul, but alas, I have none. I can only say that you ar


On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, evolve (2245) writes:
*you are not alone.



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