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"*On*ThE*EdgE*" by OttOEviL

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The song is dragging in my head
And i know its just a matter of time
So im asking for your hand
Would you save me some time

Cus im sitting on the edge
Trying to decide to stay or fall
And i feel myself slippin
The signs werent so clear after all

Watch the sunshine pass me by
Setting down on the sea
Taking with it all of my memories
Of who i use to be

And im sitting on the edge
Trying to decide to stay or fall
Cus i feel myself slippin
Was i ever really there at all

Paint a portrait of my face
As i find a peace of mind
Looking down over space
I saved you some time

Cus i was sittin on the edge
Tryin to decide to stay or fall
And i felt myself askin
Were you ever really there at all




© 2008 OttOEviL

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On Tuesday January 22nd, 2008, Revisable Retina (148) writes:
I'ts good to see you writing again Josh. This is beautifully done with a ton of feeling put into it. -rach


On Tuesday January 22nd, 2008, OttOEviL (90) writes:
;)


On Tuesday January 22nd, 2008, Mab (971) writes:
I knew it was you as soon as I seen the title ;) sad and soothing...made me think of Otis Redding..lol. I would love to hear the tune behind it.


On Tuesday January 22nd, 2008, An Expired Member (17) writes:
that's really beautiful.


On Tuesday January 22nd, 2008, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:
i like reading this from you Josh... dare i say, almost a softer side? i can imagine this in a ballad, with long dragged out screams, instead of musical insanity.... kind of like the softer side to a dope metal band. glad to see you havent dropped the pen


On Tuesday January 22nd, 2008, OttOEviL (90) writes:
Thanks cloud.. Yeah its been a couple months since i got back on here... Just wrote that one for an acoustic song.. I swear im always amazed at how tuned in you are to my writing!! You nail it on a dot!!



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