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your tallons etched into his heart
So crimson and yet torn apart, Diminished

You stole the mirth from upon his lips
His smile left with nowere to fall, Deprived

You took the sparkle from his eyes
His joy has nowere left to hide, Defeated

You smoothed the charactor from his face
His look is now just a vacant space, Detached

You Sratched out his soul from deep within
His body is now limp, with nothing left but flesh, Dead

So you changed your man to be like you and now you don't want him



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On Saturday April 12th, 2008, An Expired Member (4) writes:
diminished deoprived defeated detached and dead... nice


On Saturday March 31st, 2007, Eric (93) writes:
So sad.. What a great write!!! Your a wonderful poet!


On Friday March 30th, 2007, urbanhumility (1398) writes:
the echo of sadness is heard..................well done


On Friday March 30th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (660) writes:
Oh yeah, those that whip and break, are left with a shell. Works both ways...I could see me becoming that had I stayed with some.


On Friday March 30th, 2007, Mab (967) writes:
this is definitely one of my faves from you. write on, Lean! :)~Meg



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