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the wounds wont heal
tell yourself youre whole
maybe thats all there is to say
we all crash anyway

my blood wont have the chance to dry
I no longer hear them calling
got something sharp to cling to
nothing warm to hold you

I cant hide in plain sight
look at you backed against the wall
any thoughts of hope disapear
all that faith turns to fear

no longer invincible
beat down and broken
all of this is more than fair
if you dont, why should anyone care?

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On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, Vilification (39) writes:

sometimes taking a different point of view on a situation can mean a world of difference, especially when we look at ourselves....dont know if thats what you were going for, just what i saw...i love your writing...

On Wednesday April 18th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:

i completely agree with Ainsof! sharp objects can sometimes be ur best friend;) all in all ur a great writer and i enjoy reading ur works!

On Friday March 16th, 2007, Mab (995) writes:

"something sharp to cling to". i liked this very much.

On Thursday March 15th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:

very nice.

On Monday March 12th, 2007, Ainsof (1831) writes:

embracing the hopelessness with sharp objects, renouncing faith with a voice choking on the pits of despair... is there any thing left, is there ever a reason to care... sorrowful and crushing

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, ANGELSLAYER (23) writes:

I don't know what to say!Great job and I hope I read more from you.

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:

*speechless* i agree with saddenedheartofdeath . real deep n dark

On Wednesday March 7th, 2007, heartdripsblack (768) writes:

definately a dark write. but i can relate. nicely done. ~ saddened.

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