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Homecoming came and I had no date,
Cause my girl said I she would no longer date,
Torture and torment this women did bring,
To crush my heart with a sling.

To follow it through… a dagger of rust,
From this women I gave my trust.
A women with no heart or soul
To bring this on me twice in a row

The candles go out with the flame of her love
To bring sadness on this day given to me from above.
Alone I go down the trail of shadows…
In search of my missing soul.

A light I see… my dear friend it is with word of the light.
A new date they have found me which they think I will like.
I cave under pressure and agreed with this deed.
The dance I did go with someone I did not know.

7 months ago that was and still today…
I travel with that someone I now know
My love she now is… and forever will be
I pray she too feels this way for my heart is still mending

From the pending pain and I pray
She will not bring rain upon my day




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On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Nadir (613) writes:
This was interesting. It had nice flow, and good choice of words. Still for me it is to close to real "story telling". I loved it becouse i care about "you two". But as a poem i think it needs editing.


On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, alone (198) writes:
I like it...its good sept...you rymed date with date...oh well.....great job'!


On Sunday June 29th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
nice. I know what it feels like to go places w/ people you don't know, but sometimes it is a good thing (like in your case). I'm really glade you BOTH went because now I have a new friend who helped me probably more then anyone. No Offence Tut Tut. :)


On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, Aurora_Light (577) writes:
I to went under pressur to that date and I am thankful for it everyday. good write.


On Friday June 13th, 2003, Aurora_Light (577) writes:
alright my misspellings ar driving me crazy pressure* and i forgot to add *since*



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