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...said the shotgun to the head

Your nonsense is demanding
Expecting every waking second to be spent on you
You expect me to hold your secrets
keep your skeletons for you

Is that so you can feel the weight lifted off of you
Instead, pressing down on me
Do you feel any less responsible
I hope your black heart cracks and peels

I watched you fold your wings and fall from heaven
Bringing you black clouds and your dreams
Only fallen angels deserve to bleed from wounds dealt to the heart
I hope you realize I'll be the one pulling the trigger

"Your pain is fleeting" said the shotgun to the head

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On Thursday April 12th, 2007, Army Barbie (491) writes:

"only fallen angels deserve to bleed from wounds dealt to the heart" Shit man.

On Friday April 6th, 2007, Dark Nymph (73) writes:

Excellent!

On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1801) writes:

The title drew me here from Mab's favorits. then I have to admit that I can see why she favored it. a good point and a good story :)

On Monday March 19th, 2007, Mab (995) writes:

this was great.loved the ending!

On Saturday March 17th, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:

lovely. ~ saddened.

On Friday March 16th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:

Excellent, that's all I can say.

On Friday March 16th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (687) writes:

I fell in love with this from the first line. So true what is so trite can bring so much chaos. *In past use to name the big guns Simon..for simon says..weird family tradition ;P

On Friday March 16th, 2007, Alanarchy (1693) writes:

Fuck yeah.

On Friday March 16th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:

wow, great imagery.

On Friday March 16th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (145) writes:

I really loved the ending.Wonderful write.

On Friday March 16th, 2007, Angels Babydoll (66) writes:

As always sweetie. Excellent work

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