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I was smelting the ores of your love
With such care
Holding them with my bare hands
To feel...
Your unknown love and passion
So forsaken to me.

The fierceful burns in my grasp
From you.
I sacrifice myself to make you...
Love, passion and care
So much more to say
Faithful, honest and outgoing
So much more to do
Men will simply crumble to your sight

My work wasn't done yet
Melting your greater feelings
Into something, completely legendary

Your uniqueness did striken me
In my manly dreams
I still wish to know how I got here
Creating you, a perfect entity
Not even considered human anymore
Your might, is too stunning

But eventually, before your birth
I could get used to it
To the bright'n'shiny star you've become already
So let me finish my work
Beauty, intelligence... perfection?
Angel's wings, growing already
Princess or Queen, Angel or Goddess
You can't be defined, we're too weak

I already kneel, before your greatness
At your biddings, here to serve you
My life's done though, for I crafted you.
Live on.



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On Saturday June 2nd, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:
Absolutely breathtaking. You've left me in a state of awe once again, King.


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
stunning, purely stunning. no more can be said


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1821) writes:
Rock and rool again .. I like it.. it works



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