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There was a shining bright star on a certain roof
Perhaps it was only a flare, to catch people's attention
But a certain form could of been seen
A white robe beating against the wind
While a crowd amasses just below her
You hear her singing through space'n'time
Sky's anger grows, becoming dark
Tears fall down her cheeks, as her tune keeps on rhyming
Guided inconsciously, I run
Fastening the fate of my life, as a normal person
"J'arrive, oh précieuse étoile..."
Her voice, as simple as it seemed
Was so stunning, I was litterally pinned down
Now the sky was crying along with her
While the lightning of my heart was striking here and there
Damning everyone, for not helping her
I screamed out, and her glare aligned my eyes
I felt like I was being torn apart...
I felt like I was being tortured, physically and mentally
Heavenly surrender... I kneeled down...
I dared lifting my chin...
But now, the pain was simply...
Too... Relieving...
"Pourquoi... tu m'as tué... Je voulais seulement aider..."
At this moment, her glare turned into an Oasis
Full of sweetness, full of care
Why was it so different...
She jumped...
Everyone stood back...
I stood up and lifted my arms...
Catching her... No matter how crazy that would of sounded
Her voice, as no others, caressed the very depths of me...
"Mon amour, je ne sais quoi dire... Amène-moi, je dois te faire montrer le monde."
I obeyed, and went out with her, in my arms
She was my Queen, she was my everything
Charmed? No, I'm just in love.
Heavenly surrender, sweet paradise...



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On Sunday May 20th, 2007, Zhaal Nyet Telka (170) writes:
This was a most welcomed and enjoyed write JP, everything about it made me noth frown and smile. You are such a wonderful person, so full of wonder and caring...


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Forgotten Angel (475) writes:
wow. when i saw the title, i was expecting something different. i held my breath when i read she jumped. you capture me completely with each of these letters. completely amazing!! -Kel


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, saintedmad (997) writes:
m m m, francais...a nice languid effect, n'est pas? and the rest is so dutifully rendered, so eloquently whittled in each space of each phrase. . . a melted.esque write. . . wonderful


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Army Barbie (501) writes:
This was so...breath taking.


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
sublime.....intoxicatingly simple and one of those moments where...you could have been telling me it and I'd be hush hush listening all the way.....truly excellent in ways I can't describe/Col :)


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, silent circus (399) writes:
once again beautiful...........your still amazing and full of love to the depths of your soul....~*danni*~


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:
This was beauty beyond all pain, all misforgivings. Immaculate displays of emotion and dazzling portrayal of perfection. God, this was stunning.


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:
Truly I have been convinced that I MUST read all of your works. I believe that the ended fit perfectly as well. So many things I could say about this, but none of those words could compare to yours.



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