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"Can you kill this Soldier? Part 1" by Nore

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Flying in a chopper through the high facilities of a certain group
His mission was given, retrieve information, and defend yourself
His battlegear was ready, his knife sharpened enough
Enough to bullets to carry on multiple fight

A light...

The helicopter was flashing red
They were locked down
Matter of time before they call it a may-day.
Time to fly down.

A burning smell...

The engines, burning as more pellets incrust themselves into the ship
A white and a black smoke comes out of it.
The chopper starts a neverending turn-around
It crashes down...

Am... I... alive...?

He tries to move, but nothing seems to budge
He keeps on trying and manages to move a piece of the ship
Alas bound to freedom for now
Standing up, he hears the far howlings of the hounds

Fuck...

He places his weapon behind his back, and starts running
He doesn't stop, he doesn't look back
Running for his life, running for the sake of his country
A mission to complete, a duty to fullfill.

Exactly like recruit training...

An enemy soldier pops out
He jumps in front of him, with the knife already out
First slashing his hands, then his throat.
The body falls to the ground, making a bloody mess with all the grass

This is my bloodlust...

Eyes wide open, ready for anything
He craves for more violence
He needs it, he needs to kill
To keep on moving

I love this... make it my bloodbath

More soldiers appear from the bushes
Hiding himself, he studies them closely
He aims for the head of the 2nd one
The trigger pulled, the once-living creature killed his brethren

*Giggles* One more to go, here that is *Grins*

He throws a rock elsewhere, for his attention
Holding the knife once again tightly in his hand
Slitting his throat, litterally cutting his head.
He keeps on cutting him... Blood, spilled everywhere.

I want to have some fun in their own home...

With the weapon already on his arm
He moves carefully, watching for any details
Hearing all the sounds
Studying every single fact around him.

Nothing's happening, it's getting on my nerves

Hah, alas found

A huge facility, well guarded. Towers everywhere, mounted machine guns
The kind of thing you'd freak out unless you're a bomber, or from Al'Qaeda.
The question wasn't there... However, he wanted to kill as many as he could
Making it way to the base, he keeps on going. Some cages spotted.

The hell is going on here? Sounds interesting and fun for once.

Growls of beasts, of creatures echoing in the forest
But even in the base, some of the so-called guards... are not human?
Blackened eyes, 2 arms and 2 scythes for 2 more arms... Blood dripping from every parts of their body, nor that it seemed they cared. Teeth? You'd say razorblades. Those abominations crawl this place. But yet, not everything has been seen. What about those giants? Big guys, with apparently human hands, but with no human look. No eyes, and a missing jaw. Huge shoulders, huge bodies, are they even torturable, or even killable?

*Grins while his eyes shine* This place is fucking paradise.
A bloodbath all for me. Oh fuck I'm going to ave some fun.

Roars... Again... Everything is unknown about them, but he is soon to discover what kind of horror awaits him... To be continued.



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On Monday March 26th, 2007, GraveFlower (383) writes:
it totally reminds me of when i was talkin to u and u were playin warcraft haha, gr8 ~*dani*~


On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Dark Nymph (73) writes:
Awesome Frenchie! I want the next part! =D


On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Alanarchy (1689) writes:
Great story. Very rambo-esque. I have a bit of criticism, though. Punctuation, punctuation, punctuation. I hate to sound like every teacher I've ever had, but you used it sporadically if you used it all all, brother. I'd go back over that if I were yo


On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Alanarchy (1689) writes:
And I'm not really sure why you used the word "Alas" when you did. A few lines were like that. This is great as a rough draft, man. But I'd definately like to see you go over this with a fine comb.


On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Alanarchy (1689) writes:
You've got a beautiful concept for a action filled, bloody horror/war thing going on. It really is a sweet idea. It just seems rushed to me.


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, Mab (997) writes:
okay mon amie, i'll try to be patient!


On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Nore (41) writes:
lol Mab, amie is for girls =P mon ami would of been more appropriate, good try though :D


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
*falls to the floor and holds her breath waiting for the next part* damn this is good!! i usually dont like bloody things..but this is excellent!! -Kel


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, Aunty Depressant (687) writes:
Reads like being in an action flick/Koontz similar... I am glad that more stories are picking up :)


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, just breath (53) writes:
Wicked, I can't wait for the next installment!



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