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It is with a great laughter
That I watch this basher
For all they do, is rhyme
But they'll never catch it in time

The meaning of their own creation
Such a new way to perversion
They think they're cool because they can give you a beat
Nonetheless, they can't totally feel it and live it

Poetically incorrect

They come in with their girls, most likely called ''Hoes''
Yet, only soon will they realise the hidden wombs
The youth of their nation, such a long pride
There's nothing to do out there, but to bribe.

With their so-called might, they will create perfection
Not realising yet, the creatures of the night, their abominations
Their work is now rebelling, a lovely bloodlust
They all have one goal now, to turn you to dust

Poetically incorrect

Is what they call RAP, for it rhymes like crap.
The control of their lives, with their guns and knives
Can't you understand, can't you see ?
You'll never acknowledge the power of the land, nor admire the beauty of the sea

Someday it'll work out, to something nicely done
But at current times at war, you can only prone

Prone and wait, little child, wait for the horrors to pass by
Do not misunderstand the reality that comes to its finest
Let them try to fool you, and show them who's the first to die
Someday they will understand, their insanity and non-sense, has fed your lunatical morbid imagination, to its best.



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On Sunday March 18th, 2007, Dark Nymph (76) writes:
Fantastic Nore, another awesome poem from you you 'ex-gangsta' you :) - Tash


On Friday March 16th, 2007, silent circus (399) writes:
haha once again aweseme, but you used to be "gangsta" too didnt you? lol good write!~*dani*~


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Nore (44) writes:
Yeah, back in the times, I was, then you know what happened, all the events changed me, I realised what was good for me, and my tastes. And here I am, with my version of this hell lol.


On Thursday March 15th, 2007, Forgotten Angel (475) writes:
haha. i dont like rap. never did. i love this! and i agree w/ Spikes..you def. got ur point across. and this is very thought provoking. im tempted to steal brother's rap music now and burn it :) -Kel


On Thursday March 15th, 2007, Spiked Tongue (33) writes:
... in a way i really do agree though (even better you made me KEEP thinking about it) , nice!!


On Thursday March 15th, 2007, Spiked Tongue (33) writes:
DAMN... wow - i can't say that i agree 100% but you TOTALLY got your point across, and So powerfully - awsome write



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