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This promise...

I said those words
I was the one who promised

A promise...

That I will keep,
That I will always mean
Through pain and sickness
This heartbeat will always be present
It's a promise that I will fullfill
Not even death can stop me
For I have a duty to watch on

This love...

Is what makes me want to live
Is what makes me live.
Makes me realise, that my life is wonderful

But this promise...

Will be my doom, if anything happens
Will keep on haunting me, if you leave me

It's a promise...

That I care too much for,
That I always respected

Hard times...

Don't help it at all, but I'll keep on tight
For we will stay together all night
And I'll be there by your side
Just to keep you warm, and hold you...
Kissing your tears away.

Victory and Defeat...

It is my promise
The one I have made
Just for you
As a caring sign
As a ''sacrifice''.

It's...

More than I can give...
More than I can endure...
A promise after all

I will...

Keep my words
Be there for you
Never betray you.


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Inspired by a song, by some of the people I know
And of course, inspired by my own achievements, for I know too well
What promises are. I was able to attain my goal
To never fail a promise, and I'll keep on going.



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On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:
babe this was just awsome..i loved it, you write so beautifully..and i have to agree with all the other ladies, who ever gets you is one lucky ladie!!!~manda~


On Wednesday March 14th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:
Such a powerful and inspiring piece. Thank you for sharing


On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, Dark Nymph (73) writes:
This brought a tear to my eye. Don't ever give up your ability to write. I know you've stated to me that you're there just remember I'm here for you too.


On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, GraveFlower (383) writes:
nore, your words are always truely beautiful in mind and heart,---she is the luckiest girl alive to have your devotion, for sure,.....awesome~*dani*~


On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
she must be a really lucky lady, too. *sighs* who wouldnt be to lucky, to have you?


On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
reading* and i truly mean every word i say. i don't say things i dont mean. especially when it comes to poetry. you are a great poet, and i'm glad you're here. -Kel


On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
this..is amazing. *wipes the tears from her eyes* this is why you're one of my favorite poets. you're amazing. you can draw my emotions out with just a single word, a single amazing poem. you are one of the most talented i've ever had the pleasure of read


On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, An Expired Member (9) writes:
So true, so true keep it up.



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