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It was a time she could hardly remember
For the lust had gone, to let the real feeling take over
Such an honest and great love, she gave with all her soul
For the wonderful times had faded
She hadn't lost hope
She was all but there, waiting faithfully
Yet, it is with fear she trembled, at his approach
As the time flows, her love stands still strong
For he could beat her, tortured her, betrayed her.
Her love remained there

As for him, he was all abusive
Beating her during entire nights, litterally, raping her.
Looking at her with pity, and with laughter
He made her feel so miserable
The Dead embrace was more comfortable
No matter how bad the wounds were
No matter how much she had suffered
Her love, was still intact
Such craze, such insanity
All for a man she had cherished long ago
But lost him, as days passed with him, with a so-called love

His insanity grew bigger, and the beating were greater
For she was about to breathe for a last time
He laid next to her
She was crying, he was resting
Or so, such a peaceful rest, it was a divine moment
She cried harder, and let her grip loose
She stood up, wiped her last tears
Leaving him to his own chaos

"I'm sorry, my beloved one."



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On Tuesday May 29th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:
This was great, morbid but not over indulgent. It's write as such that evoke a ton of emotion, since their simplistic and honest! Great Write! \Billy/


On Thursday March 1st, 2007, tangeled (556) writes:
this was intense. to love something that hurts you can be difficult. i liked the ending. it shows faith and strength. nice write.


On Friday February 23rd, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:
this put tears in my eyes...it's going in my faves!


On Friday February 23rd, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:
heartwrenching...your writing is a gift to all that read


On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1093) writes:
To be trapped in such a relationship...knowing you need to get out of it, but loving with everything you are regardless. The imagery in this, is excellent. The message, even better. ~*Beth*~


On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, An Expired Member (8) writes:
this is powerful to me....I love this....thanx for sharing this piece


On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, silent circus (400) writes:
oh....you are absolutly remarkable....whos this one about?......you bring tears to my eyes....beautiful.....~*dani*~


On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
interesting story, dug the ending



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