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Hear: moaning, gasping
See: blushing skin quivering
Smell: her arousal
Taste: our juices on her wet kiss
Feel: her tight wet grip

*These are Tanka poems. My speciality. A five line version of the Haiku. they are supposed to be this short.

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On Monday September 3rd, 2007, Please Press Reset (196) writes:

not really my thing, but cool nonetheless

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

different. and different is good. great

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Mab (995) writes:

this is great. I don't see too much Haiku or Tanka at DP(maybe I'm not looking hard enough)refreshing!

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:

Interesting. I'll have to try writing one sometime. Well done.

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