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a Vicious invective

noise!
noise!
this incessant rambling never ceases.
endlessly,
endlessly.
a rippling, snarling invective.

car alarms, dogs bark.
at dawn I close my eyes,
then the lawn mowers start.

due to this influence.
I rise in a weakened state.

.....................down....................
.....................down....................

.....................exosphere......................
...........thermo sphere............
.........mesosphere........
.....stratosphere.....
...troposphere...
through the layers of atmosphere
.........................I plummet...............................

Ow! I hit rock bottom bed rock, 12 step program drop-out.

after nights of insomnia,
life tends to be dull.

and all is written in.
sayings and accomplishments.....

I just wanna get some sleep.

-Mason Allison

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On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Sin (1637) writes:

god i know this feeling...insomnia is the mother of all whores and ive slept with her many a night..the frustration pulsed and faded into resignation with the last sentence..im lovin your style ~kristy

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Nuri (192) writes:

this is amazing! the pounding words, the fall, the bitter end. unpleasant ride. great write.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:

you people make me want to kill myself

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Mylissa (1085) writes:

wow this was wonderful.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Mab (1021) writes:

this was amazing! I could feel myself plummeting through the atmosphere with you

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

I love your face. Thats why I wear scubba gear to bed, so the frosty fat ice cream cone kids and their cartoon languages stay on the outside of the glass .. splendid script my friend. good night.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Sharon Rose (637) writes:

somebody needs to write an encyclopedia of your comments Daniel, with interpretations to boot...

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, dying angel (1343) writes:

omg. "after nights of insomnia, life tends to be dull." so true. you've captured the racing of thoughts here so well. "Ow! I hit rock bottom bed rock, 12 step program drop-out." i loved the way you said

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, dying angel (1343) writes:

"i hit rock bottom bed rock" the use of "bed rock" added to the struggle. this was superb.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

bloody hell!! This is a similiar notion to my 'Paranoia Is My Best Friend' poem which I've never posted...anywhere. I love this...exosphere/thermosphere.....yes yes....sound!!

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

"12 step program drop-out" what a unique and unexpected line.....fuckin ace :P

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, elisa (2021) writes:

the incessant 'noise' frays the very fabric of my psyche... well said.

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