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Pain

Love
If there ever was such a thing
Surely it dwells in my breast

Drift
I can't be certain of the uncertainty
Surely my suspicion is wrong

Heartbreak
My stomach hits the floor
The sky falls down
And me with it

Pain
If there ever was such a thing
Surely it dwells in my breast

Hope for tomorrow

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On Sunday December 28th, 2003, Delilah (132) writes:

AH!! I agree with everyone on this, I can't really say anything that hasn't been said, except that this is something I've been trying to write down for years and have never suceeded in doing!! And you did it in so few words...emotional..deep...and just

On Sunday December 28th, 2003, Delilah (132) writes:

plain awe-inspiring...~Delilah~

On Friday September 26th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

aww, poor justin. goodgood write, kid. -B

On Friday September 12th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (966) writes:

Nicely written, struck a familiar chord in my heart. Just realize that tomorrow or tomorrow's tomorrow there is always another chance. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Thursday September 11th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:

I'd have to agree with Urban's comment on this. Beautiful. ~ mw

On Thursday September 11th, 2003, urbanhumility (1398) writes:

beautifully internal, solemly true......urban

On Thursday September 11th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

Yes, love. Who needs it. Gives pleasure and pain. Both a fav of mine but also a deadly mixture. Live not for tommorrow but for today, I always say...

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