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Broken

Something went wrong
But my soul was blind
And the sour note was hidden by the symphony

There can't be a God
I can understand death
But life can be a curse too

Was it him?
Tears cannot hide my anger
And rage will twist away all pretense

I smile
I cry
She laughs
She cries

He took it away
He had no right
Why can't it be right again?

Life is truly a curse

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On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

I like how this piece kind of jumps around but keeps the same feel and idea the entire way through. It's almost song-like.

On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:

This is really good! and long....It makes you think, and that is about the best complement I give to anyone. Poems that state the obvious are annoying. this is wonderful.

On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:

yeah, real long. for you. but yeah. this is me now by the way. out with the old, in with the new. -B (note the B)

On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:

Yes it is...Great poem, keep writing!

On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, SeventhCircle (24) writes:

oook... for all of you out there who know me, this was a situation that was hypothetical and inspired by a dream, so don't get any ideas...

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