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Bittersweet

Everything tumbling down
Torn asunder, life’s not worth it
But the light at the end of the tunnel
Just won’t go away
Simplicity is a blessing
Better black than divided
Why must life be gray?

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On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Nadir (613) writes:

A well crafted poem. Simplicity is a blessing, when its made of words like these. Tiger

On Saturday August 16th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:

it's certainly not worth it, if you want the light to go away...

On Saturday May 17th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

yoohee, loverly justin. short, to the point... i like it.

On Saturday May 17th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (739) writes:

I like this one - we'd all get along if life were a neat little division of things...but it's not! Ciao, T/S

On Friday May 16th, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:

woohooo! I am commenting. yep this is definetly bi-ist, but I like it. --eileen

On Thursday May 15th, 2003, Griffin (134) writes:

really nice, i aslo love ur info, fuck the stystem

On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

Say you like the danti from devil may cry???-Kefka

On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, IceDragoness (250) writes:

it definately is confusing how things are always grey, you're much too hard of a critic on yourself, this is good ~Dawn

On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:

Of course, better grey than black and white! But wonderful piece!

On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, alone (198) writes:

I like this much!

On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

this poem's really bittersweet HEHEH I MADE A PUN anyways good job justin old boy, keep them comin'

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