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***my mom wrote this piece and read it at my grandmothers funeral. I like it, and I thought it was special, so I've decided to post it with her permission.***



My mother told me

We arrived at night.
This memory is clear.
You all went off to bed, but I stayed up
and watched the storm.
The lightning flashed sudden scenes
in our little valley,
thunder rolled back and forth in the hills
pulsing like salt waves over pebbles.

The electricity triggered my soul.

In the morning
everything was washed clean
and the air smelled of the ashes of metal.

So many years ago,
 But this memory is clear.

Now she sits by her window
Waiting
for the sky to turn yellow
and the clam to descend.

In the hills a sudden crack and roll.
And then the rain.

The storm will wrap arms around her
and dance her to sleep.




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On Friday May 5th, 2006, Zen (602) writes:
for serious your mom said this? your mom owns.


On Tuesday October 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:
if your mom said this i give her all i've got, cause it says something about her personality.. i do like it, and i wish i was smart enough to have said this before.. its great..


On Thursday August 4th, 2005, An Expired Member (38) writes:
I see where you get your talent from. like MisterSeason said tell her to get an account. I'd love toread more of her poetry


On Friday July 29th, 2005, PoeticHellion (238) writes:
That's really beautiful. I want to meet your mother.


On Sunday July 17th, 2005, purr_verse (1420) writes:
Absolutely beautiful - gentle and insightful and very well written. Your mother has a lot of talent. :)


On Sunday July 17th, 2005, Just a Rose (33) writes:
your mother writes beautifully. this was really nice. its always hard to loose a loved one, i'm sorry


On Sunday July 17th, 2005, suicideseason (2101) writes:
Sad...yet comforting.Tell your mother to start an account.


On Sunday July 17th, 2005, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:
Your mother writes beatifully.. Im sorry for your loss.. -Fairy


On Sunday July 17th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (817) writes:
this is beautiful....may your grandmother rest in peace, Griffy*hugs*


On Sunday July 17th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (312) writes:
dear god...I'm speechless. -kitty



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