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*BITCH*

You evoke me,
you put two hands around
my neck and then you choke me,
your spiteful words
they cut away
only to intice me,
a woman scorned
is twice as strong
so dont invite me..

A masquarade, a cheap facade,
all along you
want to fight me,
a plastic smile,
it stays awhile
and then I wipe it
up off your face
a * pretty (dis)grace*
see how you like it..

My confidante
I'll strip you bare
so dont (de)test me
one by one
each strands undone,
your weakness... it astounds me.

INSECURITIES swallow you whole
But as i spit you out
and then watch you fall..

[Stop.Bitch.die]

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On Thursday April 19th, 2007, RepulsiveAttraction (107) writes:

Fuckin eh doggy thats good rage.

On Thursday April 19th, 2007, prettydisgrace (132) writes:

yep.. well some of us just write to release our inner demons thats all.

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, OttOEviL (90) writes:

Doesnt anger spit out great poetry!!! Sometimes i love when im mad just so i can write!!! =]

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, ANGELSLAYER (23) writes:

This was great!I could feel the malice.. It made me shiver.

On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Winter Born (159) writes:

As usual, I will have to back mab up on this one... all of your work is very well done. simple to the point and full of emotion. Love it can't wait for more to show.

On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Dark Nymph (69) writes:

Fantastic. Such anger compiled into such a poem.

On Monday March 19th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (225) writes:

Babe this was awsome..i like how u can feel what you write!!great job~manda~

On Friday March 16th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (142) writes:

I really like this i felt your anger yet it made me smile.~Elana

On Sunday March 11th, 2007, Mab (967) writes:

i like it when your anger pours right off the page.

On Sunday March 11th, 2007, prettydisgrace (132) writes:

Thanks mab i have to pour it somewhere :)

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, Tania (293) writes:

*gasps* u changed some.... nice work.

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, prettydisgrace (132) writes:

thanks prick...i know exactly what u mean ;)

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (100) writes:

I love this. In fact, I love all of your poems... I tend to find myself pulled more towards your style of writing....as opposed to the people who try to be all intricate.. that annoys me. Great job.

On Friday March 9th, 2007, envolopefuck (300) writes:

This was awsome!! Such words to explain how you feel. Great job. ~Ezimo

On Friday March 9th, 2007, Kinkypoptart (755) writes:

wow. this really took me by suprise. thought this would be another one of those crazy emo writes, but its not. Great write -Kinks

On Friday March 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (3) writes:

This is wonderful! I love your use of words..Very good write!

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