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precious

I wake up in the middle of red,
i see red all around me
its sparkle is amazing,im inside a ruby
im inside your heart

its not beating too fast
although i know your alive
its closing in on me
not sparkling anymore...

i can see your soul through this ruby
i can see your eyes of emerald
i can see your life like opal
and your dreams are too precious

talk to me...let me in
like i am in your heart of ruby right now
the one i have broken
but still deep within...forgive me, you are precious

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On Monday April 23rd, 2007, carlosjackal (1772) writes:

I really liked the imagination of this piece, and those last 2 lines closed the piece brilliantly, rounding the poem off most satisfyingly. -Carl

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, ANGELSLAYER (23) writes:

Great imagery.I liked this very much

On Friday March 23rd, 2007, Enigma (123) writes:

great writng I can picture it in my mind..

On Sunday March 11th, 2007, empty_remains (78) writes:

you've painted a very lovely picture, thank you for sharing.

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, prettydisgrace (132) writes:

thanks mab,and thanks to everyone who enjoys

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Mab (967) writes:

your writing is a precious jewel.your imagery absolutely shines!

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1102) writes:

you are too cute! for somereason the first part made me think of what it is like inside of a grape :) thank you for the imagery

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, prettydisgrace (132) writes:

a grape? hehe!

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Tania (293) writes:

'im inside a ruby..im inside your heart' :) hmm intresting joey.. very good write. me liked it.

On Wednesday March 7th, 2007, heartdripsblack (814) writes:

definately a very dark write. i loved it. welcome , welcome to dp. ~ saddened.

On Wednesday March 7th, 2007, envolopefuck (300) writes:

This is great.. I loved it. And since i didnt get the change to tell you before. Welcome to dp. Hope you stat :] ~Ezimo

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