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"The Stranger's Spine" by Nuri

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I have memorised the Oriental ridges
of your bony back
the language of my topographic sanity


I have moved to the wild dance
of your night ocean spray hair
the choreography of my ballroom existence


I have listened to the soft pats
of your sneaker steps
the intense pulses of my orchestra heart


I have melded my soul
to the curve of your joyride spine
to the tree of your sketched bloodline
the written epic of my fading past


And I have drowned in the scent of you
the scent of nothing
the scent of maybe something


You have conquered
the known world
and colonised it across your
posterior anatomy
the continent of my being
painted on you
walking away.


Maybe once
just once
beautiful stranger
you would turn and look my way.



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On Thursday April 26th, 2007, carlosjackal (1647) writes:
=) The images and form were gorgeous, I feel enriched and inspired by these words...Fan-bloomin'-tastic!! -Carl


On Saturday April 21st, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:
3. This is so beautiful, Nuri. It's always fascinating how someone you don't even know can just move you.


On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, purr_verse (1437) writes:
dammit, that's what I was going to say. >:) Divine write; evocative, enriching, moving and emotive. Beautifully done.


On Saturday April 21st, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:
1. I relate to the beginning of your profile; I'm brand new but have been viewing the site for over 3 years. 2. Thank you for the comment! I wasn't expecting any because of how new I am.


On Saturday April 14th, 2007, dying angel (1344) writes:
you amaze me even more every single time.


On Monday April 9th, 2007, evolve (2232) writes:
All I can do is just breathe this in..


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Carmina Gitana (114) writes:
I love this! I generally like the body-as-world imagery and it's done particularly deftly here. Some wonderful, unexpected turns of phrase too. Great write!


On Thursday April 5th, 2007, verablue (162) writes:
i agree with magic hatter...haunting, but the kind that keeps you coming back for more because you cant forget. so many intense descriptions..."your joyride spine", "sketched bloodline", "topographic sanity"...fantastic.


On Friday April 6th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:
yes!!....Amen :)


On Thursday April 5th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1073) writes:
"the intense pulses of my orchestra heart" goodness...those last four lines are like stakes driven into the heart...I often wonder, while sitting alone, who might be watching me, whom I might not notice. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~


On Thursday April 5th, 2007, Nuri (193) writes:
Thank you. Chances are someone IS watching you. Many times I have wished this stranger would know how much she has brought into my life without even knowing my name, without me even seeing her full on her face. People are whole worlds unto themselves.


On Thursday April 5th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:
haunting unique poetics with a hint of yeaning and another impressive display of erudite sublime language and imagery; enchanting in its diction and its provacation



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