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Nothing

long hot nights
and bright red screams.
as flesh met metal;
my skin against the wall,
I retracted back my arms
and now I'm stuck here
pulling pieces
of this vacuity
back into me...
what seems so empty,
so meaningless
stays in feelings forever
trapped inside of me;
like a dream inside a dream.
oh baby, this nothing
is all I need.

(something strange I wrote)

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On Wednesday December 26th, 2007, italianbella (281) writes:

that was extreme great write:)

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:

"like a dream inside a dream." I always twist within your words..love this.

On Wednesday June 20th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (687) writes:

Very intense with quick graphic imagery...the lack of being able to feel saving one from horror? Yet somehow haunts, but makes one whole, but implies more than one nothing. Twisted. I like ;)

On Monday June 18th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:

I hear ya. Good point at the end

On Saturday June 16th, 2007, Err0r (570) writes:

Strange? Hardly. This was so compelling. I loved it. =)

On Friday June 15th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

*runs her fingers through your new hairdo*..sigh..

On Thursday June 14th, 2007, Alanarchy (1689) writes:

"Oh baby, this nothing is all I need" :D

On Thursday June 14th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:

"what seems so empty, so meaningless stays in feelings forever" yes...because those things that shouldn't mean anything when said or done...often fill a crater in a chest, or crumble the heart's strongest concrete walls. ~*Beth*~

On Thursday June 14th, 2007, elisa (2018) writes:

Nothing -my second fav word........ Nothing is a vast mistaken Something.... perhaps... the perfect cause of justified reason..... absent of argumentative logic..... very well said.

On Thursday June 14th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (97) writes:

ooh, I really liked that.. "Nothing is a vast mistaken something" RaWr! thank you for your great comment. :) glad to see it made sense.

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