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"Hypochristians" by brokenbandagedbetter

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They say to worship to get back into church
That all I need do is fall to my knees and repent
Then all this personal pain he will prevent
To kneel and pray to “The Sovereign God”
Well, my knees are bruised and scabbed
Where is this God of yours I ask
Guess I’m not really a fan of his work
As I walk through this existence
Suffering is all I see
War in the desert never-ending
Children dying so young
Little boys and girls raped by the clergy
Destruction, Hate, Crimes against humanity
Where is this God of yours I ask
They say Christianity is the way
Well, bullshit! That’s what I say!





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On Wednesday February 21st, 2007, Mnemora (19) writes:
Superb. Take that, organized religion...


On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:
Well done. welcome.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:
I agree. Nicely written. Welcome to DP.


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
amen sister! preach sister preach! i agree with crimson, WHOLE HEARTEDLY!


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
Love the title..and fantastic write..fuck all the organised religions!! :)


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:
I absolutely agree WHOLE HEARTEDLY.


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, jack paper (207) writes:
the struggle is to first accept what you are... a hypochrite.. and then try to improve.. so you see dying and hatred and rape so what? the question is...


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, jack paper (207) writes:
what are you doing about it? if you say nothing... then you are no better than the hypochrites.... and bigotry toward anybody just makes things worse


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, zanewill (111) writes:
write-fucking-on, man// i totally fucking agree!!! I love the "HYPO".. how very ap-pra-fukn-pro!!!!


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, LOKI (265) writes:
I like the title.I use that term alot.Nice write.I know how you feel



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