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"You're The Rain" by DiscordiaDarling

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If I could compare you to anything darling, it would be the rain....

I never know when or if you're coming.
but something inside me always knows you will.
Sooner or Later.
You will be here.
Is it intuition?
Or do I know that if you don't I will wither and die.

You come as a drizzle.
On a hot summers night...
pounding at my window.
you sing me to sleep.

Then you come as a storm.
heavy and a loud.
Sounds that shiver me to the core.
keeping me in fear for days.

However you come.
Whenever you choose to let yourself go.
You always give me exactly what I need.
Life for another day.


(I'm not very happy with the way this one turned out. However, I wanted it to be simple. So I suppose I got what I wanted.)



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On Thursday May 24th, 2007, crazyflax (23) writes:
Love's hold is never simple, no matter how eloquently you put it.


On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Zen (602) writes:
hm


On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, prettydisgrace (135) writes:
very good, simplicity can be intresting, this is one of my favs from you.


On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, GreyDividing (193) writes:
So damn perfect.


On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, GreyDividing (193) writes:
I love this poem. The comparison between that person that makes it alright and the rain made my heart ache with a smile. Beautiful. ~FAV~


On Saturday February 24th, 2007, empty_remains (77) writes:
Personally I think this is your best one. Simply said but oh so beautiful.


On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Mab (970) writes:
sweet and eloquent


On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, jack paper (200) writes:
there is beauty in simplicity... i really like this.. write on



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