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impure

Impure
Corrupt
I’ve been tainted.
Hopeless
Faithless
I’ve been betrayed.
Nostalgic
Naïve
I’ve been shattered.
Rage
Sorrow
I’ve been wasted.
Black
Just black
I’ve been happier.

~~i'm experimenting with some new ideas please comment~~

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On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

there comes a point in being tapered where its just not enough. just a list of words that arent showing depth to what is making you feel the things you are speaking of.

On Monday June 23rd, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

I think its nice. It's like a list of feelings! {Dk}

On Monday June 23rd, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

I like it, it made me stop and think for awhile which is hard to do. Nice lots of feeling.

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