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red tears

Cold steel upon my body
Excites me
Entices me
It even satisfies me
I lay on the tile floor
Drained,
Pained,
Deranged.
And yet this justifies.
My happy ending to a not so happy life,
Slowly,
Tenderly,
Carefully
I cut into this pale shell.
And I cry my red tears as I leave this hell.

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On Friday April 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

your work gives me chills, so hateful, but so emotional.. like everything you're feeling comes out in a few lines :)amazing

On Tuesday February 17th, 2004, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

I had to read one of your old ones here...the title caught my eye really, this write has a great flow to it+Fallen One+

On Sunday February 1st, 2004, Anybody_Killette (50) writes:

Wow.. I like this.. Good write

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

Good Write Keep it up

On Monday June 23rd, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

I like this new way of writing of yours. It's very expressive!

On Monday June 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

ooh yes, nicely done! Good write!

On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:

i got a chill at the end. good work. i await more.

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