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"drumsex/venice beach" by zanewill

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monochrome dispatches of lost warrior dreams
kids skittering unaware of the ghosts of their fathers
switch-blade-lolly-pop
look at your hands in your dreams 2 make sure ur really dreaming
sometimes the parasomnia night creatures creep silently
slithering into the dreamscape until there is no escape
you awake
sweat dreanched sheets entwined soaking wet
                     drool, cum, blood, & sweat
                salty like old pennies
I challenge all those who dream in technicolor-psychadaelic-swirling
                    multi-
                       5th dimensional exstacy?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
**************************THIS IS NOT A TEST******************************
            I TRULY NEED TO KNOW WHO OUT THERE DREAMS IN
               SURREALISTIC SCOPES OF INTELLECT
                  VISUAL DISTURBANCES/AUDIO COLOURED
                           DRUMSEX SYMPHONY
venice beach-socal-usa
sunset on sunday 10,000 voices beating in the wind & sound of the sea
transcendent beings evoked from the powerful majik of unity
       re-
         sounding from we to the sea
    to the sky & the gods
       re-
         verberating back 7-Fold across the earth, the sea, the sky,
              the cry inside the people bleeting drums & voices
not 2 ourselves
not 2 the world we live in
not 2 the atroscious lies % "cides" we've survived
  BUT...
simply many spirits joined together with the rhythm & celebration of that
 one
   single sunset that we were all priviledged to
give a good
send-off to.

what more could one wish for??



















 



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On Thursday February 15th, 2007, carlosjackal (1725) writes:
This was the bomb!!! I love celebratory poetry and when it's done like this..my word...*bows*


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1120) writes:
fucking trippy. i love venice beach. *faves*


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (751) writes:
I could wish for nothing more! Fantastic! Ciao, T/S


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, Sin (1622) writes:
i thought this was fabulous i will comment when i am in a less drunken state ~kristy


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, jack paper (200) writes:
so the hands thing really works? i'd kinda like to read this again.. in an altered state.. different but cool i like it


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, capt_funguy (992) writes:
congrats man .. you strung together all the words necessary to achieve such a beautiful statement. i thrive on these split moment celebrations. you nailed this , and nailed it well ... funguy


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, zanewill (109) writes:
capt F-UR fan-fukin-tastic OR self!!



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