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Monochrome Moods

She tore down the sky last night
And she took all of the stars with her
Gravity failed..

She dragged her nails through the horizon
And watched it slowly peel away..

Unconscious with her pulse racing
As the burning dusk
Turned a shade of grey..
She lived, slept and breathed

Life in Mono

And she woke in derelict dreams..

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On Saturday July 21st, 2007, jack paper (207) writes:

this is wonderful write more! please

On Saturday July 21st, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

haha.. im trying!!!thank you :)

On Sunday July 8th, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:

still friggen love that second line..

On Wednesday June 20th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

dittos six

On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Six-Out (1827) writes:

Ahh. I love the idea behind this. I could see a broken girl destroying the sky before my eyes. this was intoxicating.

On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, GreyDividing (195) writes:

An existential goody. Nicely spoken.

On Monday May 21st, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (443) writes:

so beautiful.

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2409) writes:

succinct yet with dreamy impact....I have a write "Life In Monochrome", slightly diff. to this.....a breathy freefall through the weight of your mind this one ...Mono-madness, yet softly so...very nice poem/work...bravio ma'am

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

oooh.. to have your presence on this very page.. :D *kisses the hatter and runs off*

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (97) writes:

I have to comment this again, because I was reading it tonight..and JESUS.. it's so perfect.. "she woke in derelict dreams" rawr! can I kiss you?

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

ahaha.. lol i just saw this now.. OF COURSE U CAN! (but you already know that dont u) ;)

On Monday May 7th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (145) writes:

This was Beautiful darling.

On Tuesday May 1st, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:

Thank you for the nice welcome Tania. Did I really come off all "getting" ? I didn't mean to! I was just explaining. I love this, had me from the second line.

On Friday April 27th, 2007, jack paper (207) writes:

stark and edgy - reminds me of a few nights i've had... more please!

On Wednesday April 25th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (388) writes:

I love your words of choice here, it wouldn't have the impact without them. Great Excellent Write!

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, raskal (206) writes:

'she dragged her nails through the horizon And watched it slowly peel away' -I felt that somehow. This is absolutely wonderful. Congrats.

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, carlosjackal (1699) writes:

Powerful, brilliant wordage..."And she woke in derelict dreams" Sublime stuff and a super last line. Love it!! -Carl

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Disassembly Boy (97) writes:

imagery was amazing.. beautiful.. stunning.. I especially enjoyed the first stanza..but I loved the whole thing really. :) can't wait for more. cheers.

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Disassembly Boy (97) writes:

Of course it took me forever to comment this.. as usual. I apologize.. You're always so kind to comment mine..and I really appreciate that.. how've you been? long time no talk on myspace.. anways, back to the purpose.. I loved every word of this.. the ima

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

Keeevinnnnnnnnnnn :)

On Friday April 20th, 2007, disc (80) writes:

This made me think of someone tearing fingernails through a fresh oil painting. Well done.

On Friday April 20th, 2007, Winter Born (164) writes:

awoke in derelict dreams... Gods! I have felt like this before! great write. short and to the point. I like that.

On Friday April 20th, 2007, Alanarchy (1681) writes:

I can see it....

On Friday April 20th, 2007, prettydisgrace (140) writes:

love the imagery Tania...loved the use or words too. gravity failed..x

On Friday April 20th, 2007, An Expired Member (5) writes:

very cool. everything's perfect

On Friday April 20th, 2007, Collective Amnesia (243) writes:

this was very beautiful...and i love the word momochrome. good job ~Tamara

On Friday April 20th, 2007, An Expired Member (9) writes:

short and stunning, caught my breathe easily with each word. Magnificent!-Jigg Saw "Ken"

On Friday April 20th, 2007, Mab (999) writes:

this was superb! rich with imagery and ripe with emotion.I could hear the sky being ripped wide open. "life in mono"...made me think of the song.this was what I've been craving.thanks hon! ~Meg

On Friday April 20th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1066) writes:

wow...I've often imagined tearing down the sky...the imagery in this is sooo very beautiful. It's beyond any term of awe or enchanted wonder I could think to type here. Excellent. Just...excellent. ~*Beth*~

On Friday April 20th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:

This was great, I really enjoyed this.

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