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Between the lines (she lost you)

Dreaming.
Where are you now?
(now when she needs you)
Self reflecting.
Her head swims in memories
But her heart it drowns in loneliness..
Imagining.
What it used to be like to be loved..
Like the torn and faded pages
She’s simply thrown to the floor..

Lighting up a cigarette..
..only to watch it burn…
Waiting.
She’s always waiting..
Though she’s never quite sure
What it is she’s waiting for..

…De ja vue …
(she’s been here so many times before)

Trying to find the love she lost..
Trying to find you.
She lost you somewhere..
She’s just not sure where..
Reading.
So hard in-between the lines
She finally lost herself..
And If I cant find her..
..Nobody can...

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On Monday March 31st, 2008, Reefer_rave (234) writes:

mmm reflective of so much..

On Sunday November 11th, 2007, totaltrip (43) writes:

nice. nice. so nice.

On Monday July 30th, 2007, saintedmad (997) writes:

love the cigarette imagery. .. burning, waiting, semi.patiently....hoping. . .. neeeding. . .its all there. . .great write

On Tuesday June 5th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (407) writes:

that was wonderfully amazing! really like this one.

On Friday May 18th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

ah ohmegosh....this is excellent, if you read this one over it's rhythms will absorb you!! Powerfully and deceptively simplistic genius....this is astounding in ways I don't understand.....fuck!!!!!

On Thursday April 19th, 2007, RepulsiveAttraction (111) writes:

Reading this played a movie in my mind. It was a chick flick but I'm man enough to admit I like chick flicks. Reminded me of the one who got away. breath-taking, Amazing write.

On Sunday April 15th, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:

this brings back so many feelings, so many memories, such a sense of lonliness and longing... good write

On Saturday April 7th, 2007, Instant Insanity (771) writes:

wow, this is so deep. Yhe title and the poem completely took me by suprise. I loved this piece. It has to be your best yet. Simply a msterpiece. ][ ][

On Thursday April 5th, 2007, Armor for your life (11) writes:

I'm just blown away this was perfect.

On Monday April 2nd, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:

Now this is perfect in every which way. You are such a beauty inside and out.

On Monday April 2nd, 2007, Disassembly Boy (101) writes:

Absolutely beautiful. I'm sorry I haven't commented this yet! grr. I've been soo busy. I loved every word, as usual. :)

On Monday April 2nd, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

'as usual' haha ;)

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1170) writes:

i cannot beleive i forgot to comment. first i love how you take your time to write something palatable, not just verbal spew. your works are always deep and thoughtfull and provoke emotion dirceted towards and understanding, not ambiguity. lots-o-love :)

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

Thank you too c ;)

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, disc (83) writes:

This is a beautiful way of expressing how it feels to be lost. I really enjoyed this.

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

Thank you.. :)

On Sunday March 25th, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:

brilliant as always. ~ saddened.

On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

Yay!! for jon :) and thank you everyone else of course :)

On Friday March 23rd, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:

This was so great that it gave me chills. Well done

On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1091) writes:

"Her head swims in memories/But her heart it drowns in loneliness.." Goodness gracious...I've lost myself in such lonely, longing tones the last week. Maybe when you find her, you'll find me as well. Gorgeous. ~*Beth*~

On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (149) writes:

Beautiful dear...loved the ending...I hope you find her.I`m glad you posted i wanted to read more of your work.~Elana

On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, prettydisgrace (144) writes:

..de ja vue.. ive been here too. wonderfully portrayed,i know its hard.stay beautiful:)

On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Dark Nymph (76) writes:

I just recently went through something like this so I can similarly relate. Nicely done m'dear

On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:

wow...this blew me away. Amazing!

On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Beautifully written. I can relate to this is so many ways.

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