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Pink Satin

I lay in your bed of lies every night
bare in-between satin sheets
knowing the only thing covering me whole is
..fabricated truths..
nightmares swathed delicately beneath laced covers
crushed thoughts silky smooth linger over me like torn-lovers

These sheets that so thinly draw the line amid love and hate
..yet..
Hold us together. So strong.
Hold me together. So fragile.
Cushioning my falls as I wake from my dreams
only to lull me back tenderly..
Just so i can fall all over again..

I lay wrapped in my pink satin
That lays shrouded in tears and feint black lace..

My pink satin.

And I know it will never be silk...

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On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Six-Out (1798) writes:

mm. This tasted despondant. I liked it.

On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Tania (296) writes:

Thanks jon =)

On Friday May 18th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

well the colours and the nakedness.....it's hard to resist, and the poem speaks of breathy needs and near misses and uses great colour/texture repeatitions to underpin its tone....one of bittersweet yet softly so almost....nice work

On Tuesday March 20th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (662) writes:

I just came on..because she's on...Hmm...wonder if one can attribute personality traits by their bedding selection? Warm and fuzzy I am, as flannel my favorite? Then in summer...just hot and naked?

On Tuesday March 20th, 2007, Instant Insanity (726) writes:

I believe she got so much commentary because she is hot. LoL There is maybe 4 or 5 girls on this. LoL Either way I enjoyed the silky feel to this :-D thehe ][ ][

On Tuesday March 20th, 2007, Tania (296) writes:

HEY!!! Theres SEVEN girls, 8 including aunty acutally!! meh!;P

On Saturday April 7th, 2007, Instant Insanity (726) writes:

LoL, Aww.. A little offensive are we. I enjoyed the poem and I was just playing. ][ ][

On Sunday March 18th, 2007, jack paper (200) writes:

i am happy to see another post from you. This is softly sorrowful and beautifully sad.. well done Tania.

On Monday March 12th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (100) writes:

I enjoyed this.. every word was beautiful. I especially enjoyed the first line.

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, Ainsof (1866) writes:

maybe satin's stronger that silk? no? love the provocative conclusion, the way you imbue the fabrics with transcendent meaning... and the colors, too, evolve into symbols of what the reader perceives... nice work!

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, Ainsof (1866) writes:

*than* oooppssss

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, heartdripsblack (777) writes:

aww such a beautiful poem. i loved it. ~ saddened.

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, Tania (296) writes:

Grrr.. u better! ;)

On Friday March 9th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (381) writes:

Very beautiful. I hope you don't settle for satin. ~T

On Friday March 9th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (381) writes:

..unless of course it's satin rope and scarves..

On Friday March 9th, 2007, Lab Rat (296) writes:

one of the writes here that leave me wanting to say something... but I'd tarnish it, so I was here, I read, I enjoyed... thank you

On Friday March 9th, 2007, LOKI (253) writes:

This is sad.But I agree with Mylissa.It is pure emotion conveyed ever so beautifully.Nice write

On Friday March 9th, 2007, prettydisgrace (135) writes:

i was crushed...thanx

On Friday March 9th, 2007, Tania (296) writes:

PSST.. (you already commented)

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Freebird (624) writes:

What a beautifully crushing ending. This was great, loved it!

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Mab (970) writes:

you are amazing,Tania. the last 2 lines are stuck in my head

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (142) writes:

This is beautiful.The ending crushed me.

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Mylissa (1056) writes:

This is exactly what is beautiful and crushing wrapping words into a song. You are pure expression, remarkable.

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, prettydisgrace (135) writes:

Lovely Tania... beautiful :)

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

pink satin, reminds me of a dream i had when i was 18, it was so vivid that i can still remember... but it had alot to do with what you are talking aobut here. intertwined lovers, grasping figments and vapor, looking

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

for a shred of happieness. sometimes we fail, sometimes we actually accomplish something, but regardless, im happy you got rid of the 'these's', have more faith in your writing kiddo, you are a stunner :)

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Tania (296) writes:

*hugs cloud* :)

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