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.... Sorry

Looking back its hard to remember..
Why I used each of your broken falls,
As stepping stones to heal my own wounds.
Relentless and hollow I pressed
Watching each bruise appear on your perfect skin
The skin I so desperately wanted to be in..
But I kept watching
As your heavy heart was overloaded in dead blood
Forcing through you.. gradually fracturing
every pure bone you endowed
Breaking you…
Because that is what I wanted.
Spite blinded me into believing so..
You were too flawless
luminous even in the dark
And I had to change that.
I had to taint you the way that I had been..
A crestfallen angel who still carries the scars.
And I don’t blame you for not forgiving me
Because I have never forgiven myself
And just so you know…
I never will.

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On Friday May 18th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

you should read Karma Doll's work, it reminds me of her; that fractured former love tone, the feeling of then marred against the now, implicit and direct and full of human emotion....driving work, nice job/Col :)

On Monday May 14th, 2007, Eric (85) writes:

Wonderfully written! Love this.

On Saturday April 7th, 2007, Instant Insanity (754) writes:

What can I say, I am simply speechless. I love the way you weive so much emotion behind your words. You truly are a one of a kind poet. Your like pringles. Once I pop, I just can't stop.

On Monday March 5th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (98) writes:

wow. beautiful and powerful. loved it.

On Thursday March 1st, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (148) writes:

This is fantastic.I absolutely loved the first 3 lines.~Elana

On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:

.... you make me want to bleed art, open old wounds and rip out muscle tissue memories, burn them and rub the ashes onto paper, just so i can write like this

On Wednesday February 28th, 2007, Tania (307) writes:

Thank you cloud. you are an inspiration to all x

On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, prettydisgrace (140) writes:

Beautiful... heartbreaking.

On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:

There not much I can add to everyone else's comments apart from this was fantastic. Honest, great choice of words and excellent flow and form - Top draw stuff!

On Monday February 26th, 2007, Mab (1018) writes:

this was very good. it echoes parts of my own past.the ending was superb..very final

On Monday February 26th, 2007, Angels Babydoll (66) writes:

Wow....good write. (( And thanks for the comment on RANDOMOSITY! ))

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, heartdripsblack (759) writes:

this has to be my fav poem from you. i loved this. nice write. ~ red.

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:

"A crestfallen angel who still carries the scars." Goodness...sorry is one of those words that is hardest to drop from our tongues...the imagery in this is excellent, the emotion raw and intense. ~*Beth*~

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Freebird (653) writes:

Sometimes sorry is so hard to say. The emotion in this was great. Well done

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

I would never forgive. This poem hits close, like a little look into the thoughts of someone who would do this to you...and I can't nor would I try to find forgiveness. This is a great poem, absolutely wonderful in fact.

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Mylissa (1083) writes:

your tone is so crushing, a beautiful display of poetry. wonderful.

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, LOKI (266) writes:

ah,The things we do that we cant change and how they haunt us so.Very nice write.You definitly have talent.

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