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Faded

Your memory is fading.. This constant revere.. it slowly slides away…
Like a flashing neon light that’s just about
to diffuse… it struggles to flicker..
but after a while.. it just stops.
and as the night sky still shines black..
I look to the stars..
I see your face…
It looks so far away now…
Traces of your smile still grace the skyline..
And it enlightens my heart..
But only for a while..
As the wind blows.. things change..
Emotions they slip away..
like the final tear falling to its ultimate death..
I wipe it slowly from my face
Watching it slowly elapse...
Like closing the pages to
An over and done
chapter.. your
memory.. I
just let
it go..
.

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On Sunday August 26th, 2007, Sketso (533) writes:

Well done... I can relate. Isn't odd how even the memories we don't want to let go of eventually fade?

On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Six-Out (1823) writes:

that ending was torment in text. I loved this piece, and I think i need to erad more of your stuff.

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, OttOEviL (95) writes:

This puts a picture in my head of you saying this piece while your sitting on the beach somewhere looking at the colors of the sunset on the ever moving ocean... I love this......... __josh__

On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, Vilification (39) writes:

i agree with anna in the fact that this was beautifully done i enjoyed the read...

On Monday February 26th, 2007, DarkLord (9) writes:

Very emotional, I like this...

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1137) writes:

damn, i really enjoyed this..sort of breathy and capturing, a reverent breath clinging to a soft sort of love. you should write in this style more, it really works for you. beautifully done.

On Friday February 16th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (97) writes:

Beautifully written, and I love the imagery.. :)

On Friday February 16th, 2007, heartdripsblack (768) writes:

definately one of my favs from you so far. nicely done as always. ~ red.

On Friday February 16th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

aww shucks! ;)

On Thursday February 15th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

art is deeply personal and reflects yourself. unique like fingerprints or snowflakes, you have a certain grace, an elegance to your style. have more faith in yourself, this was passionate and delecate. superb :)

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:

God this was wonderful. Well done.

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (364) writes:

You chose your words in such a way that tragedy seeps in between them. Well done. ~T

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, dying angel (1328) writes:

the compostion of this piece adds to the dramatic feel of it. you painted vividness. i could close my eyes and see you there...and see the sky you're looking at. great write.

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, prettydisgrace (140) writes:

wonderful write tania.you really know how to capture emotion.pleasent read.

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, LOKI (265) writes:

Very nice I like the closure in the end.I just let it go.Good finishing lines

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:

I think the ending wraps this piece up perfectly. it is crushing, yet powerful. Wonderful write.

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, raskal (210) writes:

this is very insightful -quite soothing in a plaintive sort of way -some great lines.

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