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Tears & Pain

I wish I could surrender my soul;
and shed these clothes that have become my skin
see the liar that burns deep within.
Deep within my needing.

I wish I could open the doors to my mind;
hold memories free from tears
help me understand my years,
I’m so cold from my fears.
I’m frozen.

But as I try to remember who I used to be;
I can only run and hide..
close my eyes and keep it all inside
a symphony of tears and rain..
Its more that just words…

its tears and pain.

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On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:

I'm glad to see you this morning. You've been missed. :}

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (149) writes:

Beautiful dear.So painfully beautiful.

On Monday February 26th, 2007, dead_inside (45) writes:

this is brilliant, the way you convey emotion and raw talent, I'd have thought you have a bright future in writing should you choose that path!

On Monday February 26th, 2007, Tania (310) writes:

Thank you. personally it is just a form of release.. its more or less just a little hobby to kill time thats all. But thank you all the same :)

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Nore (43) writes:

This was wonderful... A runaway from our own self... Deep and lovely. Keep on writing :)

On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, jack paper (212) writes:

our hardest battles are fought with ourselves... i hope you continue to post

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, LOKI (266) writes:

I love the emotion in this.You display it well.Nice.LOKI

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, heartdripsblack (768) writes:

tania my dear this was fabulous. when are you going to upgrade? ~ red.

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:

I like this one, very raw

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:

Very emotional and raw...wonderful write.

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1155) writes:

the shear force of your will. and who can forget the rhyme scheme (the thing i have most trouble with, kudos kiddo, definatly get an applause from me, honest and sincere, dont change!

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1155) writes:

the swirl of desperation with a touch of falling from grace leaves my heart at a bitter standstill, a beat frozen for a single moment and at the same time dries tears. to work past a world of expectation is a hard road, but im sure you will conquer with

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Tania (310) writes:

with...........?

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, GreyDividing (202) writes:

Fluidly well written. There's definately room for you around here. Welcome to DP.

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Tania (310) writes:

aww thank you!

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