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Leave me ...

Tell me shattered heart..
where do i now go?
You leave me in this abandoned wilderness
where only the wildest flowers grow

Tell me shattered heart..
what thoughts remain unsaid?
you leave me in a forgotton kingdom
where knights dare not to tread

Leave me shattered heart..
may you wilt and wane away
Let me bask in my emotions
let me live another day...

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On Thursday March 8th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (145) writes:

Short but sweet I really liked this.

On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, Imsosickxxx (96) writes:

I love how you writing is so simple but the underlying emotions are so strong. Beautiful write!

On Monday February 12th, 2007, carlosjackal (1718) writes:

The brevity of this was fantastic..and the language and strict form wre great..write the hell on, Tania..

On Sunday February 11th, 2007, jack paper (207) writes:

satisfying every time i read...

On Friday February 9th, 2007, LOKI (265) writes:

Yes this was nice.Nice way to display the feeling of abandonment

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Drea (929) writes:

I liked this. Welcome to DP.

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

Thank you Drea x

On Sunday February 4th, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:

Had a very classic tone throughout."where only the wildest flowers grow" this line lingers with me. I love the ability you have to convey so much without over writing. Very richly beautiful..Jess

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

Thanks jess..i really like your style too x

On Sunday February 4th, 2007, jack paper (207) writes:

simple and intriguing... nice very nice

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Sealed Identity (17) writes:

good write!

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

fuck this was amazing, i love your vocabulary and you tied questions and structure well in this piece, fantastic!

On Sunday January 28th, 2007, dying angel (1328) writes:

"You leave me in this abandoned wilderness where only the wildest flowers grow" that line stood out to me the most. it really puntures the whole lost feeling into my mind.

On Sunday January 28th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (688) writes:

thoughtful and touching, with a pinch of fantasy.

On Sunday January 28th, 2007, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:

simple yet deep and profound... Nice.

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