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Restless Soul

Restless soul
Dangerous dreamer
The path infront is burnished
Watch your feet as they lead you
To this place of Misery

Restless soul
Impaired perfection
The path behind has perished
Dont look back at your shadow
For it has left you all alone

Restless soul
unsweetened essence
The enduring voyage has started
Your heart has been defeated
Your senses departed

Restless soul..come home..come home

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On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, Vilification (40) writes:

I love it....

On Thursday March 1st, 2007, Disassembly Boy (99) writes:

Such beauty in desolation. I loved it. Thank you for your nice comments, once again. :)

On Wednesday February 21st, 2007, heartdripsblack (765) writes:

beautiful ~ red.

On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, Mab (1028) writes:

this is another fine example of your talent.write on!

On Saturday February 17th, 2007, NapoleonsLust (24) writes:

oh to go home..beautiful works and a beautiful face cant ask for more

On Sunday February 18th, 2007, Tania (310) writes:

Well thank you! x

On Friday February 16th, 2007, An Expired Member (31) writes:

wonderful

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, prettydisgrace (142) writes:

great read...i enjoyed this alot.very intense.gr8 stringaling!

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, Tania (310) writes:

thanks joleen..whats stringaling! jk;)

On Sunday February 4th, 2007, LOKI (266) writes:

Dangerous dreamer.I like that line.Nice write.

On Monday January 29th, 2007, jack paper (212) writes:

and with work like this maybe you've found a place to call home... welcome to DP

On Sunday January 28th, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:

Loved the tone of this work. Dripping with lonelyness, "For it has left you all alone". Its crazy to think about a place even your shadow won't go. prettyness wraped in a dark candy shell..

On Saturday January 27th, 2007, heartdripsblack (765) writes:

again another amazing write. ~ red.

On Friday January 26th, 2007, lstdarkness (34) writes:

First stanza is fantastic, I really enjoyed this write. I am looking forward to reading more... Welcome to DP!

On Friday January 26th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:

spoke almost in a stoic tone; yet with great breaking of emotional impact; the claustrophobic squeeze of the stanzas exert impressive force...come on 'home'

On Friday January 26th, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:

wonderful.

On Friday January 26th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:

so detached and yet enchanting, loved it

On Friday January 26th, 2007, Tania (310) writes:

Thank you kindly, coincedentially i have just been reading over some of your work! very impressive..

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:

my work aint nada, just another heart on a sleve

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