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Restless. Savage looks
pinned on trembling eyes.
I bite my lip to relax
As you slowly stroke
My neck again..

and I’m calm..



I’m just not breathing.



© 2007 Tania

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On Sunday August 26th, 2007, Sketso (540) writes:
calm, just not breathing... wow.


On Tuesday August 14th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (148) writes:
This was fantabulous.Short and wonderful.


On Monday July 16th, 2007, jack paper (211) writes:
short but intense and edgy... very nice Tania!


On Thursday July 12th, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:
DEAR BEUTIFUL thank you, tania, for the props on my last one!! =)


On Thursday July 12th, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:
it woulda been way more awesome of a comment if i spelt beautiful right the first time... lol.


On Thursday July 5th, 2007, asphyxia (77) writes:
hehe, what a way to be!


On Tuesday July 3rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
Fresh and clean like a mandolin set of lips, you speak begged truths and heart felt honesty.


On Monday July 2nd, 2007, Mylissa (1084) writes:
wow this is so intense, insane. I love love and love!! You're so beautiful...


On Monday July 2nd, 2007, saintedmad (1178) writes:
suspenseful and taut; a lover's tightropestrangleforbreath kind of write.


On Monday July 2nd, 2007, prettydisgrace (140) writes:
♥ i love you :P


On Sunday July 1st, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (453) writes:
yeah i agree... those two last lines set the poem. love it.


On Sunday July 1st, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:
"and I'm calm..I'm just not breathing." Those two lines, said everything. So short, but oooooh, so beautiful. Excellent. ~*Beth*~


On Sunday July 1st, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
=) -Carl


On Sunday July 1st, 2007, Mab (1018) writes:
funny, I was just thinking of you this morning and lo and behold, you have posted another tasty treat for me to enjoy :) This is intense!


On Sunday July 1st, 2007, Army Barbie (499) writes:
Oh so simple


On Sunday July 1st, 2007, Tania (307) writes:
i know. im in a simple mood today :)



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