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stare into the emptyness
that is me
a black hole
to draw you in
voices screaming in the brain
only lost your only kin
lay them to rest
assume they are dead
four blue eyes
two sets of wings
now gone forever
a toast to them
i push the blade thru soft skin
i bleed for them
i bleed again
lost within this ever
winded
lost without this never
minded
lost eternal when
torn from my breast
the flesh i created
screams in the night
i couldn't answer
i'm a disaster
the world spins faster
i close the casket
as it pierces my soul
straight through my heart
turning it cold
cold as the blade
before blood warms its soul
gives it the power
a toast to them
and to that i bleed again...

and again...


© 2007 denver nitze

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On Friday February 22nd, 2008, An Expired Member (8) writes:
I love the way this reads, definately a favorite of mine. It's the sadness and pain we must not forget, yet leave behind to become more.


On Saturday March 3rd, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:
love it, your use of short sentances to build suspension works brilliantly, can relate~


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
living can be suicide at times..I think I understand how you meant that. Great write.


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
nicely done i like it. ~ red.


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Instant Insanity (773) writes:
ewwww. I hate Suicide Poems :-| What can you possibly gain by taking your own life. ][ ][


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, tangeled (556) writes:
definitly not a suicide poem. just a living nitemare. thanks for your comment anyhow.


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Instant Insanity (773) writes:
I think you should explain your reason behind this before you let them read the poem. Its quite beautiful when you think it and no the background to it. So Might I suggest you do that ][ ][


On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, tangeled (556) writes:
over a year later... here ya go this is a poem about losing my daughters and wishing i could bleed for them (sometimes i do) and take away the pain felt. thats all no suicide poem here, oh no but definitely a death poem. thank you for reading. ~tangel



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