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by the way...

and by the way...

i just wanted you to know
that you hold my heart
but not my soul

and in this life i must

.go.

.go.

.go.

die i ...will.

but i will not

...die...

.whole.

because it is in death
that the lost
find their souls.

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On Tuesday May 13th, 2008, After hours (225) writes:

The irony in death...while others feel the loss, you feel the found...soul-soother,lovely.

On Friday May 2nd, 2008, Lady Crescent Moon (350) writes:

oh that give me hope like never before, thank you

On Friday May 2nd, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (287) writes:

A comforting statement, and well written TA, *salutes*

On Thursday May 1st, 2008, the-rapist (304) writes:

this is the written breath of hope

On Thursday May 1st, 2008, NikesRain (1455) writes:

sullen and whispering... yet there's a quality of strength and the ending breathed promise... excellent

On Thursday May 1st, 2008, Narcissa (630) writes:

Perfect!

On Thursday May 1st, 2008, saintedmad (842) writes:

....cl.ever wicked end.ing.. .the subtle sureness of this is so good. blessing+ness

On Thursday May 1st, 2008, Caliraphy (194) writes:

You blew me away.

On Thursday May 1st, 2008, The Poison (278) writes:

oh woah. that is so true. -mars

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